Hillary Clinton has a wealth of political experience. She also believes every child in America should have equal opportunities when it comes to education. Hillary Clinton wants to enforce gun control, in order to prevent gun violence. When the time comes America should vote for Hillary Clinton. Hillary Clinton is the more experienced candidate. Hillary Clinton is running as a Presidential candidate, and she has had plenty of political experience such as being in charge of major events that are happening in the United States. Hillary Clinton has served as secretary of state, U.S. senator from New York, first lady of the United States, first lady of Arkansas, a practicing lawyer, law professor and an activist. Hillary Clinton has had experience having to make big decisions to try to make a situation better for everyone, she is here to make improvements not to just tell the people what they want to hear. Many people do not agree with her on what she plans to do with our country although she is willing to make reasonable improvements to help build the economy back up. Everyone around the world deserves a free and equal education that is legal. People are thinking having Donald Trump as president is better because he is “going to build a wall”. That is not the best way to solve any problem, especially because he is just trying to block out the problems like they aren’t even there. A big reason Donald Trump wants to build the wall is because people are claiming the immigrants are taking the people’s jobs when in reality the jobs we will probably have in the future aren’t even known of yet. If people would continue school through college we would be getting the better jobs as they would trying to get a good paying job without an education and wouldn’t have to worry about other people taking our jobs away since we could possibly have a better education when it would come to the point of getting jobs. Hillary Clinton is trying to control gun rights, she’s not trying to take the guns away. Hillary Clinton has made remarks in some debates about gun control, she isn’t looking to make the people who own legal guns upset, she is looking at the bigger picture. Which is the mass shootings that are happening where more and more innocent people are getting injured and killed this is occurring because there is very little control over the access to bear arms. If we would have more gun control maybe these shootings wouldn’t happen. She’s trying to make society more safe, she wants people to feel safe to be around others. She is wanting to save lives. America should vote for Hillary Clinton because she has had many opportunities in her life to show she is more than capable to become a leader and make improvements in society. She is trying to give everyone a better life. She wants to make the society better as a whole because the more people that can go to school, the more jobs that will be made and become available. Hillary Clinton wants people to feel safe, not just in their homes, but outside them too. She wants to slowly make small improvements that mean a lot to most people that in the long run will make America a safe and happy place again. Work Cited : http://www.nytimes.com/2016/10/21/us/politics/al-smith-dinner-clinton-trump.html?hp&action=click&pgtype=Homepage&clickSource=story-heading&module=first-column-region%C2%AEion=top-news&WT.nav=top-news&_r=0 https://www.hillaryclinton.com/about/hillary/ http://www.allsides.com/dictionary/gun-control
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Mr. B
11/10/2016 10:01:32 am
Elaboration needs to stick to the topic. You still add too many clauses in your sentences that would be.
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